Ethos

Role: UX Copy

Scope: Onboarding

Ethos is a modern life insurance company founded in 2016

Ethos’s mission is to make life insurance affordable, accessible, and easy, but their user onboarding had a problem:

The first three screens had the highest drop-off.

Users were being asked to commit time and personal information before knowing:

1) If they were eligible
2) How much it might cost

This created friction and mistrust, two conversion killers in insurtech.






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The Problem


From my content audit and competitive analysis, I identified a core user anxiety:

“I don’t want to waste time signing up for something I can’t afford or know I qualify for.”


Key Pain Points:

- Pricing is hidden behind multiple steps

- Eligibility is unclear

- High cognitive load early in the flow 


This meant users were dropping off before experiencing any real value.





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Hypothesis

I reviewed the onboarding text, looked at drop‑off data, and noticed the gap: if users don’t feel “this is for me” or “this is affordable” right away, they bail. 

Hypothesis:
If we show users the cost and eligibility upfront, they’ll feel safer continuing and be more likely to complete onboarding. 






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The Pivot

Originally, the task was to rewrite onboarding copy, but after my competitive analysis, I noticed a pattern: The high-performing competitors surface a quote estimator early. 

So I changed direction:

Instead of optimizing onboarding copy alone, I redesigned the UX content for a quote estimator that appears before full onboarding.

This allowed users to:

1) Check eligibility

2) See personalized price ranges


…before committing to the full flow.






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Role & Process

What I Did & Key Decisions

1) Reframed the Value Proposition
Before:
“Our process is 100% online and takes as little as 10 minutes.”

After:
“Get a quote. See a range of personalized price estimates in seconds.”

Impact: Shifts the focus from company convenience  ---> user value.

2) Reduced Anxiety With Plain, Reassuring Copy

I introduced:
 - Clear explanations of what the quote means

 - FAQ content directly beside the form

 - Language that emphasized no obligation and no commitment

Impact:  Addressed fear-based drop-off common in insurance flows.

About the project

 I personally took the lead on:

  • Full UX audit of onboarding
  • Competitive Analysis
  • Quote Estimator Copy

Outcome & Learnings

About the project

  • Reducing uncertainty early in the journey increases trust and conversion. When users understand pricing and eligibility upfront, they’re more willing to continue.
  • Clear, plain language lowers cognitive load in high-stakes flows like insurance, where users are already anxious and skeptical.
  • Inclusive language is part of good UX, but real-world constraints (like regulatory or issuer requirements) can limit what’s possible.
  • Fewer, more meaningful steps can outperform longer, “polished” flows. 

Learnings:

 Outcome:
34% lift in onboarding completion

Ryen did a great job researching the space and providing copy with great

clarity and insight.”

- Mike, Ethos

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